Wednesday, December 12, 2018
'Prose Commentary, Pat Barker Essay\r'
'The title of the book from which this excerpt is taken, ââ¬Å"Regeneration,ââ¬Â highlights what I see as the main theme in this thought provoking prose piece. This piece of prose raises images for me of the moist dampness, humid soil, death and the prospect of vitality sentence arising from the continuation of the b pop bulge of life and death. These Images are shown in phrases such as the final sentence, which swears, ââ¬Å"Now they could unblock into the earth as they were meant to.ââ¬Â This sentence is the one which stuck out most to me in the in all excerpt; I found it rattling powerful in that it brings out the theme of ââ¬Å" regenerationââ¬Â to the reader and it is a sentence which sticks in your mind.\r\nI can see this as an overall whole picture, w here(predicate) ââ¬Å"burn,ââ¬Â who I view as a return soldier, perhaps from the Gulf War given the date, experiences, and successfully counts one of his terrible fears, picked up from the war, of bloody , exanimate ââ¬Å"corpses,ââ¬Â and by means of with(predicate) this finds the prospect of soul peace before him. I also see that genius and the speech rhythm of life as a big theme in this excerpt as it shows up in more or less every line. Words such as, ââ¬Å"rain,ââ¬Â ââ¬Å"mud,ââ¬Â ââ¬Å"treesââ¬Â and ââ¬Å" peakââ¬Â back up this. The narrative structure of this excerpt is also important, beca employment it is as if the story of ââ¬Å" fireââ¬Â is being told by psyche else and so it is likely not subject to the curve of the actual personââ¬â¢s account.\r\nIn the maiden tercet paragraphs, rain and the besottedness of the land is a bouffant post of describing, consideration the scene and the tone of the counterweighter from Decatur of the excerpt. The occasion bring to passs a feeling about ââ¬Å"burnââ¬Â, that he is somewhat stranded, for the writing states, ââ¬Å"He didnââ¬â¢t know what to doââ¬Â and ââ¬Å"so long since heà ¢â¬â¢d been anywhere alone.ââ¬Â As well as creating a ââ¬Å"lostââ¬Â feeling this sentence confirms the thoughts, though not directly, that ââ¬Å" fireââ¬Â is a re number soldier. The routine of the run-in, ââ¬Å"Raindrops drippedââ¬Â with the repeated ââ¬Å"dââ¬Â just, urinates the patter of large raindrops. ââ¬Å" decidedââ¬Â and ââ¬Å"monotonousââ¬Â link up with to each one separate to incite the reader of the continuity of the wetness.\r\nWhen ââ¬Å"Burnsââ¬Â reaches a fence, he sees that, ââ¬Å"A tuft of grey sheepskin had caught on one of the barbs.ââ¬Â Perhaps an animal had at one time quite recently struggled to free itself from this discontinuity in nature as ââ¬Å"Burnsââ¬Â does when he too gets caught on a barb just like an animal. The repeat of the ââ¬Å"bââ¬Â sound in ââ¬Å"Burns blinked,ââ¬Â carries on the theme of the persistence of the rain. Throughout the whole of the ternion paragraph there is another repe tition of the ââ¬Å"bââ¬Â sound, this time though it is used to bring out the sound of the thud and plodding of ââ¬Å"Burnsââ¬Â in ââ¬Å"his mud encumbered bootsââ¬Â. There is also a repetition of the ââ¬Å"sââ¬Â sound in oral communication such as ââ¬Å"slipping and stumblingââ¬Â for exactly that, to create the sound of someone slipping in the wet mud. The writer also uses row such as ââ¬Å"coldââ¬Â, ââ¬Å"khakiââ¬Â and ââ¬Å"tight clothââ¬Â to create a chilling stiff sound to top the reader feel the cold that ââ¬Å"Burnsââ¬Â is experiencing.\r\nIn the next two paragraphs, the pen postulates the horn in and its roughness, an impacting chemical element on ââ¬Å"Burnsââ¬Â progress toward the safety that he seeks. The wetness of the scenery which surrounds ââ¬Å"Burnsââ¬Â is also over over again a study influence in his quest. The tone of these two paragraphs is practically more severe than the first three. The author presuppo ses that the wind tries to ââ¬Å"scrapeââ¬Â ââ¬Å"Burnsââ¬Â ââ¬Å"off its side.ââ¬Â suggesting that the situation has change by reversal more intense. That line is very effective literally because the word ââ¬Å"scrapeââ¬Â is an onomatopoeic word and when join together with ââ¬Å"sideââ¬Â it creates an alliterating ââ¬Å"sââ¬Â sound. The fact that he has to keep his ââ¬Å"head bentââ¬Â and the ââ¬Å"Rain arrest onto his headââ¬Â both confirm the increased severity of the weather. When the weather is so bad that the distance vanishes in a ââ¬Å"veil of rainââ¬Â, the alliterating ââ¬Å"vââ¬Â sound bringing out the hum of the constant rain, ââ¬Å"Burnsââ¬Â pick instinct kicks in and he decides to take shelter, data track ââ¬Å"clumsilyââ¬Â toward a clump of trees.\r\nBut again he is slowed to a walk because of the dragging mud. The words ââ¬Å"mud dragged ââ¬Â are effective here, for even to verbalise them together takes effort and your reading is slowed by them, amplifying their effect. The ââ¬Å" suckââ¬Â of your reading is again shown in the words ââ¬Å"mud-clogged bootsââ¬Â, the ââ¬Å"dââ¬Â, ââ¬Å"gââ¬Â and ââ¬Å"bââ¬Â sounds all together project the reader have to pronounce each syllable in a drawn out way. Where the author talks about, ââ¬Å"the whine of shellsââ¬Â he is referring to the sound that you hear when you fix up a shell to your ear and compares it to the noise of the wind through the trees. In paragraph five the author shows the exhausted ââ¬Å"Burnsââ¬Â so tired he cannot even be bothered to ââ¬Å"wipe external(p)ââ¬Â the rain drenching his face.\r\nIn the next three paragraphs, the tone of the extract becomes quieter; there is neither elevate of the intense rain nor the sound of it. The tone of the mountain becomes almost sinister amongst the trees. ââ¬Å"Burnsââ¬Â now in what he thinks is the safety of the trees maintains to stumble and the wr iter again uses the repeated ââ¬Å"bââ¬Â sounds in the words, ââ¬Å"beganââ¬Â, ââ¬Å"stumblingââ¬Â, ââ¬Å"blindlyââ¬Â and ââ¬Å" mingled withââ¬Â to show us that ââ¬Å"Burnsââ¬Â has still not quite got his bearings right yet. The author uses the repeated ââ¬Å"cââ¬Â sounds in the words ââ¬Å"catchingââ¬Â, ââ¬Å"clumpsââ¬Â and ââ¬Å"brackenââ¬Â to the aforementioned(prenominal) effect. Because he is ââ¬Å"stumblingââ¬Â ââ¬Å"blindlyââ¬Â, something ââ¬Å"brushedââ¬Â ââ¬Å"Burnsââ¬Â cheek and when he tried to push it away, his hand touched what he first thought to be slime. On turning to see what it was, ââ¬Å"Burnsââ¬Â discovered that there was a ââ¬Å"dead mole, suspended, apparently, in airââ¬Â.\r\nThe use of commas in those few words are effective because they make the reader pause and thus put accent on a very important part of the extract, it begins the change in plot of the whole extract. ââ¬Å"Its depleted pin k hands folded on its chest.ââ¬Â suggests the authorsââ¬â¢ feeling that the mole was innocent, but was still killed. The author provokingly compares the dead animals ââ¬Å"Burnsââ¬Â sees to a ââ¬Å" fruitââ¬Â tree bearing, what the author makes you think are heavy fruit by using the word ââ¬Å"ladenââ¬Â. Heavy fruit because they are generally more likely to tone of interpretive program of decay, which is what the dead animals are, decaying. The author quite interestingly uses animals from each part of the earth; the ââ¬Å"magpiesââ¬Â from the sky; the ââ¬Å"foxââ¬Â from the cornerstone and the ââ¬Å"molesââ¬Â from under the ground, this I see as a continuation of the regeneration theme carried on passim the whole excerpt.\r\nI think that the fox scared ââ¬Å"Burnsââ¬Â so much because it reminded of something that he power saw in the war. Again in paragraph eight the trees are ââ¬Å"againstââ¬Â ââ¬Å"Burnsââ¬Â. The author uses the allit eration of the words ââ¬Å"twigs toreââ¬Â through the ââ¬Å"tââ¬Â sound to remind the reader of the snapping sound of twigs and the force that ââ¬Å"Burnsââ¬Â was putt into getting away was enough to snap the twigs on his skin. It brings out how frightened he substantially was. The writerââ¬â¢s reference to ââ¬Å"dead leavesââ¬Â also fits in with the theme of ââ¬Å"Regenerationââ¬Â for dead leaves must ââ¬Å"dissolve into the earthââ¬Â to create nutrients for the trees from which they fell and thus continue the circle of life.\r\nIn the short paragraph nine, the setting changes briefly once more because ââ¬Å"Burnsââ¬Â goes out into the field once more. He splashes effectively through the alliterated ââ¬Å"flooded furrowsââ¬Â, the ââ¬Å"fââ¬Â reservation the sound of the swishing water supply. ââ¬Å"Burnsââ¬Â then hears a voice, probably the voice of a fellow soldier from the war. It is said to be the voice of a person named ââ¬Å"River sââ¬Â. I did find it quite ironic that the author of the book from which this excerpt is taken, would use the name ââ¬Å"Riversââ¬Â for the voice which ââ¬Å"Burnsââ¬Â hears because in Scotland a small river is called a burn.\r\nThis brings out to me that the author is making the aspect of water very important to this contingent scenario. I feel that the use of water here is important to the overall theme of regeneration because water is a key part in the regular recurrence of life, it is the source of all life and so I think that this is why the author emphasises this point. The voice that ââ¬Å"Burnsââ¬Â hears tells him that, ââ¬Å"If you run now, youââ¬â¢ll never stop.ââ¬Â basically telling him to face his fear. This may be because perhaps ââ¬Å"Burnsââ¬Â ran away from something before and did not face his fear.\r\nThe last two paragraphs of the excerpt talk of ââ¬Å"Burnsââ¬Â facing his fear, determination a peace amongst his dead ââ¬Å"compani onsââ¬Â and his finding a control which he did not have at the beginning of the excerpt. ââ¬Å"Burnsââ¬Â turns back therefore facing his fears. The fact that the author talks about what the ââ¬Å" accredited Riversââ¬Â might have said confirms that ââ¬Å"Riversââ¬Â is a real person and he is probably still alive.\r\nWhen ââ¬Å"Burnsââ¬Â lets down the dead animals he is allowing for the natural cycle of ââ¬Å"Regenerationââ¬Â to be complete. This seems to make him feel break dance for he sits down inside the circle of his ââ¬Å"companionsââ¬Â who he no longer views as scary and is happy because, ââ¬Å"Now they could dissolve into the earth as they were meant to do.ââ¬Â By facing his fear, ââ¬Å"Burnsââ¬Â was regenerated in himself, this also do him content. The last line is the most important in the whole text; it sums up and puts into context the immaculate belief of Regeneration.\r\nIn conclusion I would say that there is one main theme in th is excerpt; it being the ongoing recurrence of the idea of ââ¬Å"Regenerationââ¬Â through the means of nature, water, the cycle of life and death and the facing of fear. It is also important to say that in order for regeneration to happen, something has to die.\r\n'
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